On Fri, 13 Apr 2007 21:49:45 -0000, Jim Logajan
wrote in :

Larry Dighera wrote:
Below is a first draft of my critique of this report. Any
suggestions, error corrections, or other critique is welcome.

What's your intent, other than posting it to Usenet? Are you planning to
send it as a letter to the JAMA?

Well, after I refine it, with the assistance of the knowledgeable
readership of this newsgroup, I will submit it to the authors, JAMA,
AOPA, and AvWeb.

Do you see any glaring errors?