"ArtKramr" wrote
From: (Crusader561)

Sometimes I just don't get you at all Art.

And what is your expertise on courage? Tell me about it.

It doesn't matter. Your story is indicative of a personality that just
has to wrench their arms to pat themselves on the back.

I think you are less than the man who you fictionalize to make
yourself into a hero.

Keep working on your fiction, you're style remains too juvenile
for adult consumption. I would think 8 year old kids would
probably understand the bravado, and drinking in bars to prove
yourself a "man."