Jack """"\\_Wings_//"""" wrote:

Hi
I am working on better mark(english) at school. Could you have a look on
my scribble? It is very important to me ... you now. I will be lifelong
thankful for everyone.
Why don't you post it to a group on English language or something like that?
1) You'll get more knowledgeable results there; the readers in this group
don't all speak English natively (including yours truly).
2) It isn't off topic there, as it is here.

Regards,

André